the concept and artwork are fantastic,but the picture and the reflection interlap with eachother abit too much,you could probably lower the reflection's opacity a bit more or move it into an area where it would interfere less (unless this is what you're aiming for)
EDIT: i don't know if you changed something or not,but looking back at it,it seems alot more clear then the last time i've watched it,the message stands stronger now